AS – 79b Original Story (Dystopian Novel Teaser)

The following tale is one I began as a writing exercise a while back. Since I haven’t uploaded anything for a while I thought it was just good enough to share as a teaser. Hope you enjoy. Any feedback is appreciated.

Carter

Jesus.

It was cold.

So cold.

The door.

It wasn’t far now.

Just a few hundred sloshing paces ahead.

A harsh whistle and the metallic ping of projectile impact.

Carter broke into a run.

How had they caught up so fast?

No time to think about it now.

“Fucking serpentine dipshit!”  Lauren’s voice blasted tinny across the plane.

He zigged. He zagged. He slid.

He was at the door.

The card. Where was the fucking keycard…?

His fumbling seemed eternal.

Another whistle.

A searing pain in his ear.

Had they hit him?

No time. No time.

Relief washed over as he’d finally dislodged the card from his cargo pocket.

He wouldn’t  get the chance to use it.

There was a hiss, a clang, and two strong arms that nearly dislocated his shoulders as he was pulled into the station.

The rough rescue had caused him to flip on his ass. The new vantage affording a final glimpse of forest.

A chill ran up his spine as he registered the outline of the Nagant wielding, green hooded, figure standing deathly still at the edge of the treeline. Indifferent to the cold rain.  

The door hissed closed and the magnetic lock engaged.

Fuck.

Inside

“That was dumb.”

“How else are we going to eat?”

“You stayed out too long.”

“Hey. If you’re such a pro. Why don’t you go next time.”

The low light was exhausting. Barely illuminating the utilitarian briefing room. There was coffee but it wasn’t enough.

“I’m the only one that can do repairs.”

Carter laughed. She was actually telling him he was expendable.

“You really live up to the stereotype.”

“What do you mean?”

“Germans are grating.”

Lauren rolled her eyes.

“Look. It has nothing to do with you or me or anybody. I have a role. You have a role. If either of us dies then the chances of survival significantly decrease.”

“You don’t have to spell it out.”

“Yes. I. Do.” Lauren slammed a fist onto the table.

“Javohl, mein herr.”

Lauren sighed.

“Look. When I say you have fifteen minutes. That means fifteen minutes. Not twenty. Not even fifteen and a half.”

“Try finding a spot for a beacon in fifteen minuts. If it’s not too much canopy, then it’s too conspicuous, if it’s neither, then it’s too close to the shelter, or too far from the shelter, or too close to an old beacon.”

“Again. It’s about survival. Not the beacon.”

“If I hadn’t placed it you would say the same thing.”

“No. I. Wouldn’t. I need you alive.”

“Yes, and alive means I need food. And without the beacon there is no food. So if I played it safe. You’d be here telling me fifteen minutes was just an estimate. There is no neat way to survive Lauren.”

“I can see them on the thermals Carter. I know their patterns, their paths, their habits. There are opportunities enough without heroics.”

“That’s not what the pantry says.”

Lauren stood up, glared, and stiffly strode away.

That was fine. He was tired.

The beacon was set.

Food would come.

He guzzled the remainder of the acrid coffee and headed for the bunks.

The shelter was a maze of corridors, stairwells, rooms, and rooms within rooms.

He’d spent half a decade here and still managed to get lost at least once a week.

But he knew the bunks well enough.

The walls displayed alternating scenes of the old life. Cities, forest, transit, things that soothed, that gave a sense of normality.

Or at least they used to.

Now it was just row upon row of blank screens. And that slumber inducing low light.

Power conservation.

That was exactly Carters plan as well.

He fell asleep as soon as his head hit the pillow five stories beneath the earth.

The Dash

The trucks were housed in a cavernous garage just beneath the field.

Carter, Borowski, Schubert, Johnson, and Reid were making the grim march there.

Mossbergs, Berettas, Gerbers, and active camoflouge was a weird way to pickup the groceries.

That dim light was all pervasive. It was a site wide policy.

That’s why Johnson almost shot Rand.

“Hey..” Rand began as he rolled out from under the truck.

Only to have his words cut short by the audible click of a safety.

“Jesus..watch where you point that thing asshole.”

“Ain’t smart to surprise us like that.”

“Lauren didn’t tell you I was down here.”

Johnson shook his head.

“Of course the techie doesn’t think the mechanic matters.”

“Is there something wrong with the truck?” Borowski asked.

“Not anymore.”

“That’s reassuring.”

“Can’t exactly go to Auto Zone.”

“Auto Zone?”

“Nevermind kid.”

“Ok.”

“You guys need to go NOW.” Lauren’s tinny voice blasted through the PA.

“Guess it’s gonna have to do.”

“It’ll do.” Rand said picking up his toolkit.  

Carter was always struck by the size of these machines.

The tracks reached chest height and the cabin stood eight feet off the ground.

Borowski slid open the door and made his way to cockpit.

Carter rode shotgun.

The others buckled themselves to the bench.

The engine roared to life with a low rumble.

Borowski’s ability to pull these behemoths from between each other never failed to impress.

It was a football field and a half before they hit the incline leading to the bay door.

Twilight pervaded.

The stillness was palpable. Even from within the hull of the motorized behemoth the liminal eeriness went bone deep.

“Three miles to the dropsite.” Lauren’s voice came crisply through the coms.

“Any bogies?”

“Negative.”

Three miles in this all terrain monstrosity was reasonably quick. Reasonable wasn’t quick enough. There was no quick with something that heavy.

That didn’t stop Carter from wishing for speed. Everybody did.

The tension of being outside, in any capacity, vehicular or otherwise was all pervasive.

“You’re still good guys.”

They were thankful for the update. Thankful that somebody had aerials and an eagle eye.

The enemy was fast. The enemy was silent. The enemy had EMPs that would stop them dead in their tracks.

That would spell catastrophe. Not only the loss of a vehicle but the unsavory prospect of fighting their way back to shelter. Fighting their way back to shelter without food.

The drop off points had to be moved constantly. Otherwise the enemy would anticipate the drop.

They were smart. So smart that the drop points had to be as random as possible. Which was a thorny problem. They had to be close enough for a quick pickup and clear of trees.

79b was nestled in the Appalachian woods.

Thorny.

Carter had a constant eye on the thermals and noise meter.

This part of Kentucky had not been rewilded.

There was no fauna.

Not since the event.

Any signature that wasn’t wind or that was louder than the creaking timber and falling leaves was suspicious.

He knew that trusting the tech was a bad idea.

All clear on aerials, all clear on thermals, and all clear on sonic meant nothing. So he’d swivel around the  360 degree cylindrical protrusion that served as the cockpit. Gazing out at the eerie surrounds through a bulletproof windshield that ran the circumference.

Nothing. Nothing. Good. Good.

The outside never failed to make six minutes seem like six hours.

“There’s dinner.” Borowski said in his laconic midwestern patois.  

He drove past it. Then backed.

Without looking up he flicked an overhead switch.

“Cargo bay opening. Stand clear. Cargo bay opening. Stand clear.” A business like female voice informed them.

“Stations.” Carter said.

There was some rocking and commotion below as the rest of the team manned the various SAW machine guns. 

Borowski flicked another switch.

“Cargo detected.”

Another flick in the sequence.

“Tractor engaged.”

This was the most vulnerable part of the operation.

It took a full minute and a half for the arms to mate with the two ton armored refrigerator. It took two more to pull it into the bay.

That was nearly four minutes of being sitting ducks.

“You’re all clear.” Lauren’s voice informed.

“Thermals clear. Sonic clear. Visual clear.” Carter said.

He swore that the sound of his teeth grinding was audible through the comm.

“Gunners. Give immediate report of hostiles. Do not. I repeat do not. I repeat DO NOT open fire until either I or your commanding officer authenticate.”

There was a three man round of, “Copy.”

Another minute dragged on.

“Mating complete.”

Nobody laughed at the odd word choice.

Another overhead switch made friends with Borowski’s index finger.

“Tractor engaged.”

‘Ah, the two minutes of hell.’ Carter mused grimly as the cargo began its tedious journey into the bay.

The biggest fear on everyone’s mind during this moment was never the enemy.

It was mechanical failure.

It was the one thing worse than the wait. An actual bodily presence on the outside was as appealing as jumping into shark infested waters.

The bizarre reality of the earth itself becoming so foreign, so dreadful, was something that the elders often remarked on. The green grass, the blue sky, the bright sun, the summer rain, all these instinctual pleasures now held a shadow an otherness.

If the tractor failed then that would begin a round of troubleshooting that could last up to an hour.

An hour on Earth. Earth the hostile planet.

The enemy snipers were good. Preternaturally  good.

79b had learned this the hard way.

Fast, nearly imperceptible with anything less than thermals, firing from in between trees and branches They would reposition in utter silence. Even from mere steps away you wouldn’t hear theirs.

Carters’ squad was the sixth.

He had no intention of making room for a lucky number seven.

It was rare that the gunners would spot a bogie before he did.

He did not engage the enemy unless a complication that involved exposure arose.

The enemy did not waste bullets.

As far as experience showed they did not possess any heavy weapons. Nothing armor piercing. They wouldn’t fire unless they had an almost certain chance of killing personnel.

Repairs were made with alternating runs preceded by suppressive fire.

The one wildcard in all this was the EMPs.

While the enemies’ access to EMPs in this sector was not particularly robust, prior teams had been hit on occasion.

Extraction was costly.

Carter had no intention of being extracted.

EMPs that produced a pulse powerful enough to break through the armor, electronic shielding, and neutralize a vehicle of this size were unwieldy.

That’s why it was so important to select drop sites where the enemy had little room for cover. Or be given any advance notice that allowed EMPs to be placed near a dropsite.

The spot was good. The meadowland was open. There was no tall grass or geological formations.

He’d see them coming. Or the drone would.

This was one of sixteen dropsites that had been used.

Thus far they had never used a dropsite more than once a season.

This would be the second time they use this one.

So, despite the enemies’ severely limited capacity for ambush Carter remained exceedingly tense.

Best practices could be bested.

Despite their diligent efforts to randomize he wasn’t sure the enemy wouldn’t find a pattern.  

Fortunately, the process was nearly complete.

“Cargo acquired. Securing in progress.”

The worst part of the two minutes of hell was over.

The remaining half minute came and went.

“Cargo Secured. Ready for transport.”

There was a loud thump as the sloping bay door came to a close.

“Haul ass.”

“Copy.”

Forty miles an hour, that was hauling ass.

Everyone was fixated on the surroundings. Watching for any little motion. Any little thing out of place.

Everybody’s jaws ached. Everyone’s shoulders were taught with angst.

The earth opened up just a few hundred yards away.

Like a yawning mouth full of dim lights.

They were home free.

Whiskey

             

The break room wasn’t much different from the briefing room. Spartan, utilitarian, furnished with essentials only, it had a decidedly clinical feel. There wasn’t a soul that would find the business-like upholstery cozy.

              Souls were something they’d let go long ago. So, while it wasn’t the Ritz Carlton. It was cozy enough.

Without a hint of ceremony Carter slid four tin tumblers to their respective squad members. He then proceded to pour each man a shot from a flask full of bourbon.

The science said that alcohol was a poor palliative for nerves. Just a temporary hit to the cerebellum. Some relaxed muscles and dampened alertness did not address the deeper physiological and cognitive effects of stress.

Screw the science.

              Carter pulled the cork so the thump was as exegeratted as possible and poured each man a drink.

              Everyone downed their shot in a single unceremonious gulp.

              Carter repeated the process till just over half the bottle was empty.


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Plinth – A Night Drive Story – Creepypasta Original


Hey, everybody sorry for the huge lag in uploads. Life is life as the Laibach song goes. My schedule is all topsy turvy, night is day, day is night, and I’m still in a bloody hotel.

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Plinth – A Night Drive Story


He could feel every bump. Every bit of asphalt conducted via tire and frame as the rickety Honda plunged through the inky dark.

He regretted the decision to take the backroads. Though in all honesty, it was more necessity than decision.

The freeway required a speed he did not find reassuring.

Roland sighed at the trees that pressed in on either side.

Trees that threatened to swallow him into some inner darkness. To extract him from his frail conveyance like a Spaniard plucks sardines.

The family gathered each October to celebrate every precious birthday as his aunt reached a hundred years of age.

Somehow, despite his financial limitations he managed to drive the five hundred or so miles from Virginia to Vermont. He did it on his own.

This was important to him. As the black sheep of the family, he staunchly loathed anything that could be perceived as assistance. He was fine with them thinking he was an asshole, a hippie, a freak. But, a bum, Nah, they were the bums, with their maxed-out credit cards and permanently stoned crotch fruit.

So, every October he loaded a duffel and cooler into his self serviced 1983 Honda Civic and left his tiny Richmond apartment behind. Stopping once or twice to stay in even tinier motel rooms.

The last trek of the trip was always the most pleasant. The deep wooded hills of New England in autumn were absolutely ethereal.

That’s where he found himself now. Though the sensation coursing through his rattled frame was anything but pleasant.

Night had never caught him here before. But, a flat caused a delay that meant his usual leisurely pace needed to be doubled.

He hoped to reach his father’s house by dawn.

That first grey finger of twilight seemed far away. Preposterously far away.

The night was like the road that rattled through him. An eternal flood that soaked every subatomic space it washed over. He was drowning in darkness.

And then like a bad horror cliché the Honda died. It was a B movie trope that he was hoping wouldn’t come. But come it did.

The alternator was fried. He was well aware that it was critically past its prime. But an evening of fine dining for his and Amy’s anniversary had been prioritized. It was a gamble between the car and his girlfriends pouting over a fifth annual cheap-ass bottle of table wine.

At the time he thought he’d won the gamble. Amy was always out of his league as his friends never tired of informing him. He was probably pushing it with his stingy Bohemianism and it was nice to actually go somewhere besides the park for once.

But now sitting in the eerie silence, inside his tin can, he wasn’t so sure he bet correctly.

Never the panicky Pete, Roland leaned the seat back, rolled down the window, and lit up a cigarette.

He sure as hell wasn’t going to call his WASP clan for help. This he knew for certain.

He did have some prodigious savings despite his meager income. Living like a monk can improve the fortunes of even the most obscure gig guitarists.

He wished he’d used the damned savings to fix the blasted alternator. But, then again rules were rules and it wasn’t an emergency till now.

He opened his flip phone to dial 411 and find a 24-hour towing service.

Of course, there were no bars in the Vermont hills.

Roland was a fatalist and remained unphased. He lit another cigarette and opened the sunroof to survey some of the brightest stars America had to offer.

He decided to try a  technique he’d picked up from one of his occultist friends – one that had always served him well.

It was called the wizard’s nod. Or to less pretentious folk – sleeping on it.

Just as he was reaching the threshold of nod his eyes fluttered open.

Did he hear something just now?

He scowled.

It wasn’t really a sound.

More like the suggestion of a sound.

It was a vibration that was impossibly faint. Like a mouse fart from an attic.

This insanely subtle thing, this ghost of a ghost, made him sit bolt upright and listen intently.

Roland hastily tied his long brown hair into a ponytail, his green eyes darting madly round the cave-like pitch, hoping desperately to locate a mundane explanation for his sudden terror.

Nothing…there was nothing.

That edible must still be working its way through his system. Roland shook his head and leaned back. Hoping a few minutes of shut-eye would bring some much-needed clarity.

Waking proved more confusing.

At first, he thought he’d spilled his coffee but the dampness that he felt was the soggy ground.

It was brown, it was green, it was day. A cold and noisy day.

Roland pulled his hoody tighter round himself as the sound of songbirds filled his ears.

There was nothing he could place about this. It was a good quarter-hour before his road trip and the grungy Honda emerged from the mists of memory.

He patted his jeans. ‘Thank Fuck.’ Five Pall Mall’s remained beside a cheap Bic lighter.

As smoke entered his lungs and nicotine hit his brain he was relieved that he had the tools to start a fire and launched into troubleshooting.

It was strange. Normally, when he woke up he was severely dehydrated. Whether from cottonmouth or whiskey he’d always end up so parched his first instinct was to run to the sink.

But he felt none of that now in this…meadow?

‘How the fuck did I end up in a field?’

He shook his head.

He’d never sleepwalked before. In fact, the running joke among friends and family was that he could sleep through the apocalypse.

He noted the dew on the grass and realized that his thirst wouldn’t remain quenched for long.

Rising to his feet he began scanning his surroundings. They really were surroundings, trees surrounded him. At least the 180 or so degrees that he could pan his head.

“What the hell…”  he muttered as he realized his feet were stuck.

He looked down. There was no muck, they weren’t sunken into the grassy floor, no pain suggested any physical reason for his present immobility. He could wiggle his toes.

Then he thought he heard something. The sound was like the ghost of a ghost. A low hum…and dread filled him.

“Shit…” he said as adrenaline provided a solution. He untied his chucks and left them behind as he hurtled towards the wood.

Running into an unknown forest that you’d just woken up in doesn’t seem like a very good idea for long. Especially once a smoker runs out of breath.

Roland leaned against a fir and cursed his cold damp socks which he removed as he panted and listened. The sound was gone.

Had he even heard one? He wasn’t sure.

But he was sure that he wanted to get his feet off the cold damp ground. So he sat on a fallen tree gathering them into his slightly oversized jeans.

‘What the fuck am I going to do…’ he lamented as he realized he didn’t have a cell phone.

And then he heard voices calling his name.

At first, he thought he’d fallen asleep again.

But, then the voices came again. At least a dozen of them, male and female… “Patrick….Patrick….Patrick Roland!”

He heard dogs barking.

‘A search party?’

He ran in the direction yelling, “I’m here…over here!”

But no one responded. Something that he found odd since they couldn’t have been more than a few hundred yards away.

The trees thinned as he ran and then he saw them…an assortment of Rangers, search and rescue, police officers, and even several family members.

All calling for him.

He ran to his sister… “Sam! Hey, hey! I’m right here…” But she was staring right past him…looking scared and concerned…calling his name.

He was just a few hundred feet away when he realized there was something wrong with her…something wrong with all of them.

They were all sort of translucent…and distorted…sort of staticky looking.

He just stood dumbstruck until a german shepherd trotted over and sat down right beside him.

Tentatively he reached out his hand. Even though the dog was weird and distorted he could feel it sniffing then licking his hand.

“Burger!” A flummoxed looking ghostly cop yelled as he approached. “What the hell is wrong with you dog.”

“Hey, officer can you hear me!” Roland screamed just feet from his face causing no response from the cop and a cock of the dog’s head.

“Cmon…boy…” The officer said tugging on Burger’s collar. But the dog refused to move.

“Damn it…” the cop cursed as more searchers gathered round to see what was the matter.

And then the low hum resumed.

Once again Roland was inconsolably terrified. And so was Burger.

With a whimper, both Roland and the dog dashed away at a madman’s pace.

Roland kept running even as he passed his car.

He was surprised that his bare feet neither ached nor showed any sign of wear as he and Burger stopped to rest beside a river.

The shepherd drank and with a shrug of the shoulder so did Roland.

But there wasn’t any time for further bonding.

The hum returned as did the fear. And the pair ran along the river bank till they reached some shallows, which they instinctively crossed, subconsciously hoping that putting a river between them and whatever would help matters.

But the hum persisted and the only seemingly reasonable thing to do was to take shelter in a boulder field.

Roland crouched behind a huge granite slab with Burger whimpering by his feet.

The sound was gone and he’d just caught his breath when a weird but merry whisper echoed through the stones.

The dog started a low growl.

The whistling stopped.

“Hullo…hullo….who’s there!” A strange voice called.

Roland was unsure whether he should answer. He craned his head around the boulder…and his jaw hit the floor.

‘Is…is that…is that a fucking GNOME?”

He rubbed his eyes just as the pair that belonged to the minuscule man fell upon him.

‘He’s dressed like god damned Da Vinci.’ Roland’s brain expostulated taking in the hat and trousers.

“You…you can see me, boy?”

“Uh…yeah….”

“Hmm…well that’s no good.”

“Shit,” Roland said backing away and almost tripping over Burger who had his head slunk low still emitting that bassy growl.

“Hey…hey…it’s alright…I ain’t gonna harm ya.” The anomaly said as it began to approach them.

“Uh-huh…and…and..who…who are you?”

“My name is Plinth. And yours?”

“R…Roland…”

“Well, nice to meet ya…but you’re gonna have to calm that hound of yours. They don’t like us.”

“Us?”

“Me brothers and I.”

“Brothers?”

“Yes, these are our mines. Cats here tend to treat us ok I suppose cause they’re the same as the cats back home. Dogs not so much.”  He replied stopping a yard or so shy of the pair.

“Home?”

“Never ye mind that. Just make sure that critter behaves and tell me how ya got here.”

So in slow awkward bursts, Roland informed this…gnome…Plinth about the sound and his misadventure.

Plinth listened with rapt attention and after a moment of silent consideration nodded his bearded head.

“Yes…that does happen from time to time. Most unfortunate accident.”

“Accident.”

“In every sense of the word. You sort of won a cosmic lottery there. Just happening to be in the wrongest place at the wrongest time.”

“Oh.”

Again the gnome nodded.

“This here is our mine.” He motioned. “But I am not a miner. I am a lawman.”

“Officer Plinth?”

“I suppose ye could say that.”

The hum started again. Burger looked at Roland in horror…as if in apology..and dashed away.

Plinth laughed. “Poor critter…he’ll be fine…I know you’re as scared as he is but you can’t outrun it.”

“It?”

“Chisla.”

“Uhuh…no time to explain it really…but sometimes it slips through…it’s an elemental.”

Roland shook his head in confusion.

“You need to come with me.”

He was uncertain about this.

“Look boy…the thing is playing with you..do you want to find out what happens when it gets bored.”

“Where are we going…”

“To my oscillator…”

“Your oscillator…”

“Never you mind…God you lot are thick….”

Plinth led him to the mouth of a cave guarded by two stern gnomes decked out in conquistador gear. It would have been funny if he wasn’t terrified.

“Wait here.” Plinth said as he conversed with the watchful guards in a weird staccato language.

“Sof Va Dep Rim Wau Oa Em.”

“Tof Na Uil.”

“Chi Sla Joa Ier.”

With that, he disappeared into the depths and returned with a strange cube in tow.

“Follow me.” Plinth said as he manned the wheelbarrow eastward.

It’s not like he had a choice. The hum seemed to have grown more persistent.

They emerged into a clearing just beyond the boulder field.

With surprising strength Plinth pulled the stone device twice his size from the cart and placed it on the ground.

“Face east.”

“East.”

“Just turn around and look towards the blasted river.”

Roland found it hard to look away from the beautifully crafted obsidian box which glowed with a subtle bluish light emanating from some sort of crystalline pyramid within.

But the hum made him obey.

“O I A I A D” Plinth proclaimed with the same staccato cadence.

Roland’s stomach jumped as if he were on a roller coaster.

“Not that you’ll remember but you monkeys need to stop tinkering with her.” Plinth called after him.


“Oh…oh my God are you alright?”

Linda was shocked to see anybody this far in the wilderness.

The youth lifted his half-lidded gaze.

“Wha…”

She switched on her walkie… “There’s a kid here…”

A crackly static confused voice responded shortly, “A kid?”

“Well…young man…could you stop making me feel old.”

“Haha…ok professor…what’s he doing out here?”

“Hey…” the gray-haired woman said gently placing a weathered hand on the youth’s shoulder.

“Where..where’s my car?”

“Car…?”

“My Honda…”

“Nearest road is thirty miles from here,” Linda answered noticing that his feet were bare.


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Roland and Hayes

“Is there anything to be said for it?”

“I really haven’t the faintest.”

Two silhouettes haunched over a grave offered no prayers.

Yet, it was not an occasion entirely lacking in reverence.

The strange light of the lantern diffused spectrally through the fog like a priest with a censer.

“That’s done it then.”

The crunch of autumn leaves beneath austere black leather broke the stillness of the night. A herald of living malice more haunting than any banshee wail.

The somber pair passed beneath the marble archway and alighted the carriage.

Roland knocked thrice and with a grunt of acknowledgment, the driver had them moving.


“Alice Humphreys is missing,” Gareth said folding the morning paper over his knee with characteristic circumspection.

Mary’s large eyes widened. A feat that would have been comical on a less somber occasion.

“I was with her last evening…”

“Yes, you mentioned as much, taking tea were you not?”

“Yes, in the garden.”

“Was there anything amiss?”

“No…well…I did get the sense that she was eager to be off somewhere. But, that’s not uncommon for a young woman. I just figured she was off to see some suitor.”

“A suitor in the night?” Gareth’s eyes narrowed.

“Well, it was really early evening when we’d had the chat….”

“A chat about what?”

Mary rolled her eyes. “Well, Inspector Mabry it was nothing but the usual business. Hopes, dreams, frustrations, and a whole deal more womanly concerns.”

“There was nothing to suggest flight, elopement, anything like that?”

“You’d be the first to know.”

The left corner of Gareth Mabry’s thin-lipped mouth curled downward as he pushed himself away from the table.

“Excellent breakfast as usual Mary,” he said laying a hand on his wife’s shoulder as he made his way towards the door.

“You will find her?” Mary called after him.

“If she was taken against her will I have some confidence if she wishes to remain hidden, then perhaps not. That’s why I questioned you.”

“Well, I can’t say it’s very much fun getting caught up in your work.”

“Duty, the word is duty.” Mabry said donning his coat and making his exit.




To Be Continued 

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The Walls (Creepypasta Original)

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There was no fear then. The shadows that the trees cast as night fell held no terror. It was comfortable to watch the world grow dark.

Now the inky shadows that bleed from the closet induce panic.

How did I regress to such a childish state?

Long sessions on the shrink’s couch are unnecessary. I remember the year, the day, the very hour.

It was late noon. I stood with Rex on the cracked drive of my budget apartment.

We made an odd pair. My uncle and I could not have been more different. He stood at six feet four inches and I at a much less imposing five-eleven. His broad shoulders were always at attention while mine drooped into my concave chest.

The only hint that this wasn’t a drug bust about to end poorly for the scruffy scarecrow facing the squalor of Yates street, was the eyes.

That really was the only family resemblance. The Jarvis eyes, they are peculiar, grey, smoky, and deep-set. I’ve never seen them outside our kin.

Rex was a man of few words. He dangled the copper-colored key and extended it.

“Hope this helps.” He said as I silently accepted the gift.

And with the sporty sound of his departing cherry red RX-7, I unwittingly found myself at the threshold of horror.


Uncle Rex had earned many friends. Among them was real estate mogul Taylor Gern. Though he wasn’t the most scrupulous of men. I suppose he did not deserve blackmail.

Rex’s work as a veteran detective for the Cambridge Police put an end to that.

Gern was so grateful that he gave my outdoorsman uncle a cabin among an impressive tract of land in the wilds of Purgatory Chasm.

I really don’t want to go into specifics since I’m dead set the place be forgotten.

My taciturn uncle was doing a favor for my father. I’d failed to publish anything since May and my landlord had had enough. My father was keen on neither seeing me homeless nor dwelling under his roof.

So, he implored his brother to lend me the place for the autumn, explaining the scenery and isolation would get my pen and thus my bank account moving again.

Rex only cared for the place in spring, so he had no reason to decline a family request.


I still remember how the crunch of gravel beneath my battered Honda broke the placid evening.

It was classic Massachusetts chill. I had no time to muse on the eerie shadows cast by the evening’s trees. I grabbed my duffels from the musty trunk and double-timed it to the door.

What a door it was. The thing was oak and sturdier than most walls. It swung into a magnificent wood-paneled parlor. I felt a twinge of shame.

It was failure and not success that saw me thrown however briefly into the lap of luxury. Though I did not care for the tacky dark green wallpaper or the Tiffany lamps I certainly didn’t deserve this.

My self-flagellation was short-lived. The need for warmth overwhelmed me. It was colder here than in the city. I felt it permeate the walls and breach my turtleneck.

Those walls, they were so well-kept. As the combination of central heat, woodfire, and coffee stirred my cold addled brains to action I realized what a truly remarkable thing that was.

The place was ancient. Based on the décor and material it had to have been built at the turn of the century – Victorian times.

I decided to break the romance by watching some Rick and Morty before bed.

Waking up alone in an old and empty house in the middle of the woods becomes amazingly normal after a few days.

But, not so normal that I could maintain my bad habits for long.

It was Friday that the fat dykish looking lady with a thick brogue dropped off one of those weekly meal kits. I remember this cause it was after I’d stuffed myself with some sort of yummy chowder that the first itch to write struck.

I no longer needed to knock myself unconscious with a constant stream of digital stimulation. No longer needed to quell the internal cries of plot hole, idiot, cliché, with reruns of South Park. Hell, I no longer could.


The only thing left to do was write. It’s not like I was about to go wandering round the woods.

Having spent most of my time on the pavement of Boston, I was suspicious of so many trees gathering in one place, all at once.

So, I wrapped myself in a flannel blanket, spiked the coffee, and clickity clacked away.

I won’t bore you with the details of my novel. That’s entirely beside the point.

What is noteworthy however is how easy it flowed.

This isolation thing really did work. Place and setting as McKenna termed it. Yeah, that was it.

That is until I no longer felt isolated.

With time my distrust of the wild began to fade. I’d stretch my legs on the various game trails round the cabin. Making sure to keep all my city slicker friends updated on my brave forays with Instagram uploads.

I was really hoping that Alice, my ex, would notice. That I could lure her out here. Bring back the good times. She was wacky for this woodland shit.

Besides, one casual ‘jelly’ comment, she never bit. Though there was no social media evidence of a new beau I was pretty sure she had moved on. And so should I.

And I did. I sort of fell in love with the woods. With the schedule of birdsong varying from morning to evening.

I’d grown so comfortable with it that I’d often sit for hours on the porch step in the cold dark watching the stars blink little morse code assurances above the treeline.

Well, it seemed the feeling was mutual.

The house grew familiar with me.

At first, it came in vague realizations. Just how it had sort of blossomed from the verdant soil, a part of the valley, and a part of the England that had carried this orchid hither.

How much had it seen in the interplay of dark and light, in the leaf-dappled centuries, how much of time had crystallized within these well kept, venerable, walls?

The house was a part of the soil, and the soil and the house were a part of the flux.

An angel singing in the chorus of eternity.

It tapped me on the shoulder.

I wheeled round.

There was nothing there save the open door, bleeding precious heat into the autumn night.

I got up and shut the door. Writing this off as a subconscious guilt-pang for the environment and my uncle’s pocketbook; I returned to my favorite step and began extracting a Pall-Mall from the pack.

I was cut short however by the feeling of a soft hand resting on my shoulder. A sensation very closely followed by the feeling of what can only be described as a gentle kiss on the crown of my head. A kiss that sent ripples of the oddest electric pleasure through my wiry frame.

I shot up to my feet and once again wheeled round. There was nothing.

By now I was so thoroughly unsettled that I no longer felt the urge to smoke.

I hastily retreated back indoors.


I sat dumbstruck on the couch for what must have been hours.

It was around two forty-five in the AM that exhaustion finally began to kick in and I groggily made my way to the guest bedroom.

My sleep was fitful, my dreams shockingly detailed, and always there was this ardent desire.

I longed. I longed for something that could not be. It was something that was…something that is…but something that cannot be…you see the madness this stream of illogic would induce if deeply felt?

The walls. The walls that led down. The walls that led down into the ground. These walls that hummed that sang with the wistful melody of centuries.

For weeks I wrote the most fantastic things, for weeks I barely slept but watched, notebook in hand, the edge of the wood from my favorite step.

The house dictated what I saw there, described it to me, I swear that I fathomed existence, its mystery, its essence.

What’s best. I had it in writing. Or so I thought.

Down, down, down. I wanted to be down to the very soil.

I descended the stairs and found a solitary chair sitting in the center of the cellar.

Unperturbed by this peculiar bit of whimsy I ventured forth and sat.

I did not mind the dark, the must, in fact, I found it wholesome.

As wholesome as the warmth that the gentle tap on my shoulder induced.

And so I sat…as the gossamer sleeves of some dark dress wrapped round me in a backward embrace. A single strand of fair hair fell from the face I felt less than an inch from my own. Though I did not see the lips, I knew that they were beautiful, only those lips could have given me such a transcendent kiss.

And now they whispered. They whispered a word, a foreign word, a word that still permeates my conscience to this very day.

“Hey! What the hell are ya doin…Jeezuz it’s wicked dahk down here!”


It was then that I felt awful. My mouth was drier than mothballs, every joint ached, and my ass may as well have been fused to the chair.

“You found him!?” An unfamiliar voice called from some forgotten world.

“Yeah, he’s in the damned basement…fuckin druggies wacha gonna do?”

“Shit, better call an ambulance.” A gruff voice suggested.

The hand that now rested on my shoulder was neither feminine nor delicate.

“Hey, buddy, this is Officer Joe Corvi, we got called here to do a wellne….O Jesus he reeks!”

I couldn’t answer him even if I wanted to.

At some point, I was moved, folded, and transported like some kinda mannequin to an ambulance.

Then I found myself playing pincushion in a bright hospital room.

“Severe dehydration…”

“Just found him sittin there….half dead…”

“No drugs…”

“You sure…”

“Yeah, he’s clean….”

Days elapsed with various visitors and attendants. I remained comatose.

At one point Alice came and hugged me. But, she didn’t stay long at all. That bitch. It hurt.

The pain was useful though. It’s what made me begin to reach for my Pall Malls.

My hand was stiff but it was moving, ever so slowly, towards….my naked leg beneath a hospital gown.

“Fuwck.” I cursed with my thick retarded tongue.

Some hours later, or maybe it was minutes, or maybe days two men in labcoats burst into the room.

“How the hell did you miss this spike?” The older one demanded…

“I..I…”

“Nevermind.” Said the voice belonging to the bearded face that now shone a bright light in my eyes.

“Son, can you hear me…?” He inquired.

“Fwuckin bwight…fuooff…” I said trying to raise my wooden arm to shield my face from the luminous assault.

“Holy shit.” The voice standing behind the man muttered.

I was shocked to discover the ordeal that I’d been through.

Apparently, Neave O’Hara the dykey delivery lady had noticed I’d left my food untouched. At first, she thought it was just a weird artist being a weird artist. When this activity was repeated for a second week, she got worried and called for a wellness check.

She’d been the one to find me in the basement as the police searched the attic and the shed.

I’d been there for two weeks.

The doctor’s said I was essentially dead. With only the most rudimentary biological functions intact. The paramedics discovered that my heart was beating at the glacial pace of 22 beats a minute.

I suppose that those that believe my strange story think me fortunate. The novel they found made me a fortune. Though I’m not sure I wrote it. Because I never wrote again.

Despite this, I was now on an equal financial footing with Gern due to television appearances and speaking engagements.

All things that I was loathe to do but did anyway because it was my long-suffering family’s wish.

In that regard, it is perhaps worth it.

Alice tried to come back to me. But, I’d have none of it. Not only did she leave me when I needed companionship the most, not only was this a cynical ploy for a comfortable life, but I could only love the angel of the house.

It is because of her that I am now a broken child of a man quivering at shadows in the closet. Fearing and longing their embrace.

For every house is a sentinel, an eardrum, that catches the stardust and keeps it. Some that have heard enough catch an angel. And angels grow lonely for wisdom is heavy.

What will call to you from the shadows to share in its strange knowledge?

Will she hold you in the space between life and death and teach strange utterances…ah…d…ah….g….ee….t…..a…

Selah.


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Tea for One (Short Story/Creepypasta/Original)

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I felt the chill. Let it sink in. Now that the drunken shouts and laughter had decayed into murmurs, I was beginning to feel the night.

My fire provided warmth enough for the kettle that swung on a hook above it. I however was cold. And that is what I wanted.

Cold animates. It promotes alertness. I had cause for that.

The simmering had grown sufficient fierce and I brewed a tea blacker than any coffee.

It was as acrid and bitter as the Vermont chill.

I wished to explore the night. To cross that strange threshold that lies atop the stairs of darkness, solitude, and silence.

Yes, I was one of those odballs you and your frigthened friends would see strolling through the inky forest murk as if it were their living room.

As you see, I do get a touch smug about my ability to master our ancestral fears. Darkness, shadows, snapping branches, and loneliness these to me had become friends.

It was you I feared. You and your prosiness. The tidy severing of your nervous system from the stars. How you had forgotten to pine for things that the damp earth sings. How decayed your limbs, how soft your skin, how dull your senses had grown from burying through corpses of information.

To me the giddy laughter and cheerful bants of distant tents were but the squirming of so many maggots. Who were too content to feast on the great reeking suburban carrion that they called home to ever enoble themselves to become flies.

I apologize. I’m getting self righteous again. It’s just that it’s so bloody hard to find companions with my idiosyncracies. And I really am terrified of becoming a corporate orchid.


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What I witnessed that night was a fate I wouldn’t wish on my ex-wife much less innocent braindead leafers.

It was just past midnight that, sufficiently caffeinated, I let the cold bear me into the depths of the Glastenbury wilderness.

An hours hike had me craving some Cavendish. So, leaning on an oak I set about lighting my pipe.

Of course that’s when the leafers came.

I heard them from a mile away.

Some of you may be wondering why such a crumudgeon makes use of trails at all. You obviously don’t know Glastenbury. This is not the place to test ones orienteering. Though at the time I didn’t know just to what wild extent that sentiment rang true.

Sure, I’d heard the stories. But it was freaks, freakier than me, in lonely meth soaked cabins that I feared. Not some, well, I still don’t know.

“Oh, my God! Joey…you said you knew the way…” the shrill cadence of a Jersey shrew drilled itself into my brain.

There were some indistinct deeper murmurrings of protest.

“Hey! Do you guys smell that…” An older female with a southern drawl had caught the scent of my tobacco.

“Ah shit, yea someone’s smokin.”

“Maybe they know the way.” Jersey again.

‘Christ.’ I did not feel like playing tour guide to lost city slickers.

Of course they didn’t have the good grace to cross my path after my tobacco was spent.

‘Can’t even finish a smoke in the woods.’ I shook my head.

“Excuse me sir.” A stocky Italian who I assumed was Joey addressed me.

“Uhuh….”

“We’re lost….” Came the drawl as what I could only describe as a Waffle House waitress ran around Rocky Balboa to face me.

“Well…I said…” drawing on my pipe for an extra laconic ‘fuck you’ effect…”ya ain’t very good at it, missus.”

“Huh!”

“Funny thing about trails…they go places….”

“Yeah…but….”

I cut her off by jerking my thumb in the direction I’d come from. “Trailhead…” I puffed.

“No, fucking way…” Joey exclaimed, as the women rolled their eyes.

“I told you.” Said the shrew.

I smirked with schadenfreude.

“No…no…something went on back there….they rerouted shit…I’ve been out here a thousand times with Roger.”

They hadn’t rerouted shit for years. This was Vermont, they had money, and they loved their woods, the trails were well kept, and well mapped. But, despite being a prick I wasn’t prick enough to feed Joey to his shrew.

“Hmm…could be…” I mused taking a swig of Bourbon to complement the leaves.

“You’re sure the trailhead’s that way…” Joey asked.

“As sure as I am that I didn’t just drop outta the sky.”

Joey exhaled an exasperated sigh. “All right Marisa let’s go.”

I was relieved that they didn’t stop to make smalltalk.

The dwindling sound of their conversation was music to my ears.

I picked up my ruck, wondering what the hell Jersey greaseballs were doing playing leafer, and ventured deeper.


Just as sufficient duration of quiet occurred for me to once again become one with the night. Yes, just as I was regaining the trust of the trees…I hear the shrew.

‘Unbelievable.’ And I meant it…there was no way for them to approach me from the same direction they’d come before. There were no side trails, and there was no way they had enough woodcraft to stealth their way past me through unmarked wilderness, in the span of a couple of hours…and why…

“It’s him!” The waitress cried.

I was dumbfounded.

Joey got uncomfortably close…and looked as if he was about to say something accusatory when he burst into tears.

“Woah.” I said. It was all I could say. I wasn’t being sarcastic. Woah, was right. The Mystery of the Bennington Triangle - Heather Sutfin - Medium

I handed my flask to the weeping dago and waited for him to regain his composure.

“I…I…told you…all of you..” he said wheeling around in a dramatic arc. “Something’s not right.”

Now I mentioned that it was cold. That that’s what I was looking for. But, now…this was downright meatlocker level.

He was right. There was something very wrong here.

The women looked terrified.

The waitress started mumbling some Baptist prayer in between incoherencies about shadows.

I did what I always do when I’m getting freaked. I began to finger the silver cross that my dad had said was blessed by the Pope when some distant ancestor of ours marched toward Jerusalem.

I really to this day cannot tell you what transpired.

Something black, shadowy, and amorphous rose from the ground. Glinting obsidian in the moonlight it charged at Joey and pulled him into the very earth.

“Come on!” I yelled motioning for the women to follow as Joey’s head disappeared beneath the leaf strewn soil.

The older woman was slow. I heard her rustic cries of panic as whatever…the hell…pulled her down.

“Sarah!” The shrew cried out.

I yanked her wrist so hard that I swear I dislocated it. But, she did get the message and we continued running.

We didn’t get very far though. Because, just as we rounded a corner one of those shadow clouds popped into view…and we passed right through it…

The taste was metallic, and the flashes of weird suggestions among the inky, tugging, tingling mass was beyond any sane description.

I said…we passed…but that is not correct.

I passed.

The shrew like her companions had been drug to whatever netherworld those things had emerged from.


A hiker found me the following morning clutching my dad’s heirloom. No one had seen the Jersey leafers. And the following weeks saw no reports of missing persons. It was as if they never existed.

All this could have been some sort of whiskey dream. But, I am not of an imaginative bent…

Did that bit of metal really save my ass?

And if nothing really strange had happened. How did I suddenly pick up French?

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Buried (Story Teaser)

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There aren’t too many frontiers. If you gaze up you see the stars. That’s one of three scratched off the list. The other is in your head. It is the impenetrable virgin wilderness called consciousness. Which will remain forever chaste. 

The heavens do not worry about our fiery visits. Blinking silent bemusement as ape children hop with naive sophomoric zeal, remaining flightless, as Mother Earth calls them back to nest. 

The third frontier will bury you. 

Miles of sand and water hold revelations beneath their cloak. But if you can stand the choking depths. If you can hold at bay the smothering grip in which cold and pressure have wrapped their secrets. Then there you have your greatest chance to be Columbus. 

It was an odd sensation to slip beneath the black current without the wet ghost of a single drop. 

Jack looked down. Between his headlamp and the light strewn ocean floor, there was a sizeable thick inky darkness. 

Whole phalanxes of monsters could parade in that gap. Though it was not monsters he feared.

A tear in the drysuit, or too long of a tarry, or a rapid ascent all these spelled death more painful than the jaws of any demon. 

A small dark shape flitted amongst the grid of lights, pausing every so often, at this or that quadrant. 

Leslie looked very much like a shade at the lowest circle of hell. A strange high tech shade with a pert ass hidden somewhere under all that obfuscating gear. 

Jack smirked behind his mask.

She’d been the one to lead him on this wild goose chase. Tenured professors weren’t known for humoring the whims of their students. But every man had a weakness and his happened to be women. 

His smile turned into a grimace as he remembered that his daughter at twenty-two was just a year younger than…he thought of Alice his wife…

He realized that this was no time to feel guilty as Arnaud’s midwesternesque staccato demands broke his reverie. 

“You ok Doc. Ya just been. Hanging there. Forever now. Something wrong with the equipment.” 

“Everything’s pitch-perfect Arnie. Just had to get my head straight. This is my first real dive in over a year.” 

“Copy.” 

Jack dove. 

‘I’m going to hell for a piece of ass.’ 



Well…I really, REALLY, wanted to have something completely written by today. Unfortunately, it wasn’t until a few hours ago that I actually sat down to write. Then came the old research spiral. So all I can offer is this teaser.

Hey, at least I sexed it up for Valentine’s Day. Much love to all my subscribers.

I’m not going to engage in my old shitty habit of posting snippets. I hope to have this story ready to publish right here by next Friday.

I hope you enjoy this brief little episode.

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East Berlin – Another Writing Prompt

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Nothing. Nothing at all. It was reassuring.

Viktor stepped away from the window breathing a sigh of relief.

Max clacked in from the kitchen. The corgi stood in the middle of the floor gazing lopsidedly at his owner.

It was so good that he found the canine Max. Whatever balm he could get from the loss of the dogs namesake was welcome indeed.

The black button eyes reflected the stillness that the silence tossed like a drape over a birdcage.

Viktor felt like a bird. He might be the smartest bird. Or more humbly the best guesser but he was a bird nontheless.

Max had been so certain. Unlike his brother he was afraid of heights. A physical fear that grounded him and tethered his spirit for good and for ill.

Viktor had always been flighty. It was why he’d joined the budding counterculture.

Max on the other hand wanted to change things from inside the party.

It was this logic that led him to follow the evacuation orders. The orders were logical.

But logic was so many buildings spread in brutalist array below the uppermost room of the Leninplatz.

There was no radiation.

“Whether or not this is a lie, it is better not to tempt fate, why would the Soviets abdicated their position here?”

It made sense.

But sense wasn’t truth.

Just like the myriad empty concrete cages outside were not homes.


Another free prompt for anyone to use. The original setting was meant to be in an American city but I couldn’t decide whether to stick with the familiarity of the Southeast or set it in some place like new york. For some reason East Berlin was knocking about my head as a word picture. So I googled it.

I saw a picture of a punk. And I like Einsturzende Neubauten so I went with it.

The theme is dystopian. Originally I was going to do a bit of a scene that hinted at a brother or friend running to the hills to be a survivalist away from the inrigue of a city under stress. But the city isn’t under stress. It is inhabited only by the protoganist and his dog.

Feel free to take this idea and run with it.

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Ajar – Free Writing Prompt/Idea

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Rain pattered hynotically against the windsheild. Making it damned difficult to keep my eyes open. Somewhere a million miles away a voice informed me that the door was ajar.

I hate getting out of bed. But she’d turned the shower on and now I had to piss. My lids were so heavy. Too heavy to open. But I figured I knew the bedroom well enough to navigate by feel.

I asked her what she wanted with the damned jar. But she just kept repeating the same question.

I was becoming increasingly alarmed by my inability to will my eyes open.

I swung my left foot over the edge of the bed and found an unfamiliar bit of empty space.

What the hell.

I kept edging my toes down towards the floor. As I flailed in frustration at my failure to gain purchase my body shifted.

My foot hit something wet, soft, and cold. No sooner did this bewildering sensation register then it was replaced by a sharp shooting pain traveling like an electric current up my leg.

I screamed and wretched as a wave of naseau emanated from my gut and up my esophagus.

I needed to get to the toilet.

I tired to raise myself up to my knees. I failed falling face forward into a cold wet carpet whose taste had the faint hint of moss.


I don’t currently have the time to write a full story so I thought I’d paint a bit of a scene and send it on out into the wild as a writing promt.

You are free to use it if you wish. No attributions necessary.

Just be sure to share your story if you decide to make something of it. I’m always on the hunt for fresh reading material. Cheers!


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