Or rather an amateur attempt to set a poem to music.
Or rather an amateur attempt to set a poem to music.
O my. I fear that I am becoming the master of hackneyed points. So be it.
The little hobbyist recording kit I’d bought about a year ago still has a short in it. I’m sure the company would have honored the warranty if I’d sent it in, but I’m terribly bothered by even the mildest of bureaucratic tasks and haven’t fetched the information necessary to do so.

That’s why I made the video. Well, sort of. It’s part of the reason. I also just enjoy sharing my thought processes and certain “authentic” spur of the moment little events.
I really fancied the silly little vocal melody and lyrics that I’d come up with and didn’t want to forget the cadence, pitch, and rhythm. So I thought I’d record it. Given how my phone is currently my mic and camera that’s what I used.
My dog being the nosy pest that he is decided to burst in, which added to that sort of spontaneity vibe and I thought, ‘Hmm… why not just post this.’ Maybe it’ll give someone a few moments of amusement.
Most of all though, it allows me to do my favorite thing which is pontificate about creativity and process.
I think most musicians and songwriters are too busy with the act of creating and recording to bother to share their thoughts on the matter too often. How fortunate that I’m primarily a writer and philosophy nerd. This means that I analyze the ever-loving hell out of absolutely everything for what I hope is your enjoyment and edification.
I think the fantastic thing about things like the story of Jack and Jill is that they are these little archetypes. Not so much of a particular concept like ‘the maiden’ or the ‘wise man’ but more about the vibe of a thing. They transmit a certain plasticity which makes them wonderfully malleable items for the formation of lyric and poem.
All I had in my head was the name Jill for whatever reason and then obviously Jack and the blasted hill entered in by association. Generally, such nursery rhyme things evoke memories of blissful childhood, best represented by ‘the moment of sunshine,’ and so I had myself a theme and little lyrical bits I could assemble into a coherency.
Obviously, the familiarity of the story also means that it’s likely primed for a warm reception in the mind of the audience and artist alike.
Yes, there may be some contrarian hipster sorts who’d balk at something so mainstream. However, perhaps they can fall under that ‘ironic’ spell of something so bad (by virtue of hacky premise) that it’s good.
Although, now that I think about it…maybe Jill wasn’t on my mind at all. I think that I’d wanted to go to my favorite meadow in the local wood like the dirty hippy I am. Out there is where I like to soak in the sun, as I read things like Emerson, and mock myself for the fact that I actually unironically own a hacky sack. In these moments where I’m alone in solitude, I realize, that although it is a happy solitude, I am waiting for something, longing for something.
There’s a lot to long for and wait for in a universe of infinite possibilities. But one of those things which is most tangible as a representation of them all is the lover. So perhaps it was the archetype of the maiden that spurred me on all along.
I felt especially happy that the name Jill entered into my head as a result of that ‘x variable’ that was necessary to get across this crunchy vibe. Its puerile simplicity is a wonderful foil, or background, to a concept that could be weighed down by a lot of cosmic portents which would render it unfit for my current purposes. I wish to convey happy expectation not...SEHNSUCHT
So, I hope that you’ve found this to be as fun to read and watch as I had in writing and recording it.
Thanks for stopping by and have a great time wherever time finds you.
I do a song, and I’m going to be doing book reviews, so I thought I’d start with Sphere.
This Michael Crichton classic is one of my favorite reads and I only just now noticed how it may be related to a float tank experience he may have had. Feedback is always welcome and thanks for stopping by.
– Addendum: “After trying out several models, Perry settled on a tank that used 10-inch-deep water saturated with Epsom salts. He and his wife Lee opened a float center in Beverly Hills in 1979, renting out their five tanks largely to entertainment industry types. Michael Crichton came in to float when he had writer’s block. Eventually, Crichton bought a tank of his own.”
Nerdy Delights for Crichton Fans (everyone else too! good stuff here.)
I do a ramble about how the way that music and art are framed, in this case via recording medium, drastically effects perception. As well as raise the question of whether the ease of upload effects the process and magic of creating new songs.
I also play a little ‘song’ I wrote which is just three or so chords and these lyrics:
My mellow sunshine
Showed up on time
My mellow sunshine
Dropped me a line
My mello sunshine
Pulled me on through
My mellow sunshine
With eyes of blue
I remember sitting I remember dreams (I remember grinning) I remember smiles and miles
I remember I remember All from the beginning
When my moon was highest
When the night was cold
When the taste was driest
When the song was old
My mellow sunshine
Showed up on time
My mellow sunshine
Dropped me a line
My mello sunshine
Pulled me on through
My mellow sunshine
With eyes of blue
A faded couch Nicotine nerves I’m here to vouch
That none better serves
Than to see the sun in moon
To correct the spell
Quell the monsoon
Of aught Of naught Of never
With Yes And Now And Forever
When…
My mellow sunshine
Showed up on time
My mellow sunshine
Dropped me a line
My mello sunshine
Pulled me on through
My mellow sunshine
With eyes of blue
Partially just a way to say that it’s ok to be dorky and amateurish. And partially the introduction of another concept. I’ve done various versions of the idea that: ‘learning music and math is good for everyone — because it builds discipline.’ This one came out ‘OK’ enough to upload. Though I really hope to improve on it in the future. I know it’s not anything new but I feel it’s a truth worth repeating. Thinking of seguing this into what is ‘best’ for songwriting material. Feedback is appreciated. Thanks for stopping by.